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2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I want to trip other countries with my family. My husband wants it too. But he wants explore our own countries before my family visit other countries. I agree it. So a few years ago, my family visited our countries but I can remember it I don't know why. I often forgot a lot of things. However I can forget when I visited in Japan. So before I become old woman, I want to trip other countries with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! I guess most people dream of travelling the world or least some parts of the world. I do too. If given a chance (and money) I\'d like to travel to other countries just like you. Have a good day! Take care! ~T. Lynn   I want to trip other countries with my family. >>I want to go on trips to other countries with my family.My husband wants it too. >>correct!But he wants explore our own countries before my family visit other countries. >>But he wants to explore our own country first before visiting other countries.I agree it. >>I agreed to it.So a few years ago, my family visited our countries but I can remember it I don\'t know why. >>So a few years ago, my family visited tourist spots in our country but I can\'t rember it, I don\'t know why.I often forgot a lot of things. >>correct!However I can forget when I visited in Japan. >>However, I can\'t forget our visit in Japan.So before I become old woman, I want to trip other countries with my family. >> So before I become an old woman, I want to visit/travel to other countries with my family.

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