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2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hmm.. Today's topic is very difficult to me. I had not been ever think about it. I just envy them. Many sport men and women are very popular in the world. Many people in the world just like the best sport man or woman. It is not good. Of course, they are trying for a long time for the best in the world. But it is not good. I cann't explain about my idea. I just envy them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

It is okay if you can\'t explain what you want to say in English for now. Maybe next time, you\'ll be able to do it. Well, everybody has their own dream in life but it does not mean that if you dream about it that you\'ll get it easily. We have to work very hard to get whatever we want in life. If you want to be the best in any sport then you\'ve got to practice, train and have a good diet. Same is true with others. Patience, hard work and a lot of money is needed.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Hmm..Today\'s topic is very difficult to me.

>>correct!
I had not been ever think about it.

>>I had never thought about it.
I just envy them.

>>correct!
Many sport men and women are very popular in the world.

>>correct!
Many people in the world just like the best sport man or woman.

>>Many people in the world like to be the best sport man or woman.
It is not good.

>>correct!
Of course, they are trying for a long time for the best in the world.

>>Of course, they have to try for a long time before they become the best in the world.

OR>> They have to prepare and train for a long time to be the best in the world.
But it is not good.

>>correct!
I cann\'t explain about my idea.

>>I can\'t explain my idea.
I just envy them.

>>correct!

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