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2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I want to work in my office for a long time. I am a luck woman because I still have my job despite my age. So If is is possible to work in my office despite my age, maybe I can work in my office in 10 years. So I want to help my children before they graduate in the university. And then, I want to visit another country with my husband in 10 years.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름], Happy Monday! I think it\'s every parents\' wish to see their children finish or graduate from a university. I know you can do it. See you in class! Take care! ~T. Lynn   I want to work in my office for a long time. >>correct!I am a lucky woman because I still have my job despite my age. >>correct!So If is is possible to work in my office despite my age, maybe I can work in my office in 10 years. >>So if possible, I would like to work for another 10 years.So I want to help my children before they graduate in the university. >> So that I could help my children until they graduate from the university.And then, I want to visit another country with my husband in 10 years. >>correct!

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