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I want to work in my office for a long time.
I am a luck woman because I still have my job despite my age.
So If is is possible to work in my office despite my age, maybe I can work in my office in 10 years.
So I want to help my children before they graduate in the university.
And then, I want to visit another country with my husband in 10 years.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Happy Monday!
I think it\'s every parents\' wish to see their children finish or graduate from a university. I know you can do it. See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to work in my office for a long time.
>>correct!I am a lucky woman because I still have my job despite my age.
>>correct!So If is is possible to work in my office despite my age, maybe I can work in my office in 10 years.
>>So if possible, I would like to work for another 10 years.So I want to help my children before they graduate in the university.
>> So that I could help my children until they graduate from the university.And then, I want to visit another country with my husband in 10 years.
>>correct!
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