homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Well, people are not the same. There are people like us who are satisfied having a regular job. Other people dream of having their own business. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t want it.
>>correct!
OR>> I don\'t want to have my own business.
I just work in my office for a long time.
>>correct!
OR>> I just want to work in my office for a long time.
Because opening my business is very difficult.
>>correct!
Also it needs a lot of money, I don\'t have much money.
>>correct!
But my husband wants open his business dispite he doesn\'t have much money.
>> But my husband wants to open his own business despite not having enough money.
I can\'t understand it.
>>correct!
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