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2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Would you like to open your own business? Why or why not? I don't want it. I just work in my office for a long time. Because opening my business is very difficult. Also it needs a lot of money, I don't have much money. But my husband wants open his business dispite he doesn't have much money. I can't understand it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름],

Well, people are not the same. There are people like us who are satisfied having a regular job. Other people dream of having their own business. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

I don\'t want it.

>>correct!

OR>> I don\'t want to have my own business.

I just work in my office for a long time.

>>correct!

OR>> I just want to work in my office for a long time.

Because opening my business is very difficult.

>>correct!
Also it needs a lot of money, I don\'t have much money.

>>correct!
But my husband wants open his business dispite he doesn\'t have much money.

>> But my husband wants to open his own business despite not having enough money.
I can\'t understand it.

>>correct!

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