homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the benefits of having just a few close friends? How about the benefits of having many friends?
I don't have many friends.
However I have close some friends.
If I have many friends, I can't take care of them.
To get many friends, I have to take care of them and then I can keep friends for a long time.
However it is not easy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Take care!
Wow! you did a great job. You have only one slight correction for this composition. Job well done, Ms. [이름]! Keep it up. See you later.
~T. Lynn
I don\'t have many friends.
>>correct!However I have close some friends.
>>However, I have some close friends.If I have many friends, I can\'t take care of them.
>>correct!To get many friends, I have to take care of them and then I can keep friends for a long time.
>>correct!However it is not easy.
>>correct!
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