homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
Happy Monday!
So, you started learning English because you wanted to teach your daughter English yourself. But now, you like learning it for your self improvement, right? I am so happy to know that. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my case, my motivation come from my environment.
>>In my case, my motivation comes from my environment.
I started to learn English because of my eldest daughter.
>>correct!
When she started to learn English, I wanted to teach English to her by myself.
>>correct!
But it is not easy.
>>correct!
Because she learned fast it everyday in school and in academy.
>>Because she learned it fast from school and in her academy everyday.
However, I like my decision to learn English.
>>correct!
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