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Hello, teacher. Are you having a good weekend?^^ I seem to have a good weekend, too. Anyway, your corrections were nice. I like it.^^ The text below is the next part of my paper. Mencius believes that direction of public sentiment is crucial for unifying a whole country. The direction of public sentiment, meanwhile, is bound to head for a benevolent government. Therefore, he is confident that a whole country would be unified into the country which dispenses a benevolent government. It is important to get the people’s hearts during the process of unification because the unification can be completed by gaining other countries’ territories at the last stage. This means that unification wars may be unavoidably needed for achieving unification. Mencius considers that the country getting the people’s hearts can win the wars at this stage. Nevertheless, this paper regards the last step for the unification as absorptive unification, not unification wars.

Hi there, Kaylee! I did have a great weekend. I went to a salon, got some hair treatment and dyed my hair. Actually, most of your sentences were good. I just needed to check the articles (a, an, the) and the sentence structure sometimes. Please review my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Are you having a good weekend?^^>> CORRECT! I seem to have a good weekend, too. >> I seem to be having a good one too.Anyway, your corrections were nice. >> CORRECT!  I like it.^^>> CORRECT! The text below is the next part of my paper. >> CORRECT!Mencius believes that direction of public sentiment is crucial for unifying a whole country.>> Mencius believes that the direction of public sentiment is crucial for unifying a whole country. The direction of public sentiment, meanwhile, is bound to head for a benevolent government. >> Meanwhile, the direction of public sentiment is bound for a benevolent government.Therefore, he is confident that a whole country would be unified into the country which dispenses a benevolent government. >> Therefore, he is confident that the whole country would be unified into a country which dispenses a benevolent government.It is important to get the people’s hearts during the process of unification because the unification can be completed by gaining other countries’ territories at the last stage.>> It is important to get the people’s sympathy during the process of unification because it can be completed by gaining other countries’ territories at the last stage. This means that unification wars may be unavoidably needed for achieving unification. >> This means that unification wars may be inevitably needed to achieve unification.Mencius considers that the country getting the people’s hearts can win the wars at this stage. >> Mencius believes that a country which could get the people\'s sympathy will win the war at this stage. Nevertheless, this paper regards the last step for the unification as absorptive unification, not unification wars. >> Nevertheless, this paper considers the last step for the unification process as absorptive unification, not unification wars.