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2016-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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When my daughter doesn't get a good grade with her test in the school. She falls deep sad. So I always say to her "I feel your pain" in my heart. But I don't say to her it I always angry her because of her test's grade. So I am sorry to her.

강사 첨삭


Hello Ms. [이름],

A wonderful Tuesday to you!

You could try telling your daughter what you truly feel so that she will fell better. But I think your reaction is very normal for moms. See you.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

When my daughter doesn\'t get a good grade with her test in the school.
>> When my daughter doesn\'t get a good grade with her test in school.

She falls deep sad.

>> She feels really sad.
So I always say to her \"I feel your pain\" in my heart.

>> correct!
But I don\'t say to her it I always angry her because of her test\'s grade.

>>But I don\'t tell her instead I always get angry at her because of her grade.

So I am sorry to her.

>>correct!

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