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Many people attend college to learn what they want to do, but mostly they have same reasons to attend college or university and take for granted to enter because they believe university guarantee sort of success in their way to get a job. According to statistical date of high school students’ entrance rate in 2015, almost 80% of students entered to college and it shows how attending college is important in Korea society and it is very high rates, but I think many people overlook the important thing. As I experienced, I saw many students weren’t sure about their majors while they were in course and even some others dropped out in the middle of course. And more importantly, this phenomenon is getting increasing nationally. That’s because students just strived to attend good college without specific goals. But still many people wanted to go to good college. I think it's wrong way and they have to know the title of college is not that important.

Hello [이름]!   Thank your for writing such a good essay. ^^   I\'ll see you later! ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     Many people attend college to learn what they want to do, but mostly they have same reasons to attend college or university and take for granted to enter because they believe university guarantee sort of success in their way to get a job. >> Many people attend college to pursue the careers they would like to have in the future and most of them have the same reasons for attending college or university like the belief that entering university is a guarantee of sorts in getting a job.   According to statistical date of high school students’ entrance rate in 2015, almost 80% of students entered to college and it shows how attending college is important in Korea society and it is very high rates, but I think many people overlook the important thing. >> According to statistical data in the 2015 entrance examinations, 80% of students enter college which shows how important education is in Korean society although I think people overlook one important thing which is to have specific goals.   As I experienced, I saw many students weren’t sure about their majors while they were in course and even some others dropped out in the middle of course. And more importantly, this phenomenon is getting increasing nationally. That’s because students just strived to attend good college without specific goals. But still many people wanted to go to good college. I think it\'s wrong way and they have to know the title of college is not that important. >>  In my experience, I\'ve witnessed a lot of students who weren\'t so sure about their majors eventually dropping in the middle of a semester. This is happening nation-wide because students strive to attend good schools without any specific goals. I think it\'s wrong in a way and that people should realize that the name of the university is not important.