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Hello, teacher. Could you read and review the text below? If the unification war begins, however, there would be no battle because all the people’s hearts turn to the country dispensing a benevolent government. According to Mencius, nobody seeks to fight with a perfectly virtuous prince. If so, we should regard unification war as a strong motivation for inducing the people’s responses into a benevolent government. With unification war as a momentum, a benevolent government can absorb a tyrannical government without any big violence and accomplish the unification of a whole country. Considering the book Mencius’s whole text, this interpretation also corresponds with Mencius’s political idea, which opposes power politics. subtitle : Mencius and President [이름] Dae-jung's Sunshine Policy People’s Government, which was born by the inauguration of President [이름] Dae-jung in 1998, promoted a reconciliation and cooperation policy toward North Korea, the so-called “Sunshine Policy”.

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Could you read and review the text below?

>> CORRECT!
If the unification war begins, however, there would be no battle because all the people's hearts turn to the country dispensing a benevolent government.

>> If the unification war begins, however, there would be no battle because the people's sympathy will be toward the country dispensing a benevolent government.

According to Mencius, nobody seeks to fight with a perfectly virtuous prince.

>> CORRECT!
If so, we should regard unification war as a strong motivation for inducing the people's responses into a benevolent government.

>> If so, we should regard the unification war as a strong motivation for inducing the people's responses into a benevolent government.
With unification war as a momentum, a benevolent government can absorb a tyrannical government without any big violence and accomplish the unification of a whole country.

>> With the unification war as a momentum, a benevolent government can absorb a tyrannical government without too much violence and accomplish the unification of the whole country.
Considering the book Mencius's whole text, this interpretation also corresponds with Mencius's political idea, which opposes power politics.
>> Considering the book\'s whole text, this interpretation also corresponds with Mencius's political idea which opposes power politics.

subtitle : Mencius and President [이름] Dae-jung\'s Sunshine Policy

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People's Government, which was born by the inauguration of President [이름] Dae-jung in 1998, promoted a reconciliation and cooperation policy toward North Korea, the so-called 'Sunshine Policy'.

>> The People's Government, which started from the inauguration of President [이름] Dae-jung in 1998, promoted a reconciliation and cooperation policy toward North Korea, the so-called 'Sunshine Policy'.