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2016-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I want to believe it. If I can communicate with ghosts and spirits, I want it with my parent. I really miss my parent. Especially I miss my mother but I can't commuicate. It is impossible.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Happy Wednesday!

What happened? Hopefully, you were just tired last night so you can\'t make it to class today. I completely understand what you feel. To use yesterday\'s idiom, I feel your pain. I too would like to talk to my dad for the last time even just for a few minutes. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

 

I want to believe it.

>>correct!
If I can communicate with ghosts and spirits, I want it with my parent.

>>If I can communicate with ghosts and spirits, I want to do it with my parents.
I really miss my parents.

>>correct!
Especially I miss my mother but I can\'t commuicate. It is impossible.

>>I especially miss my mother but I can\'t talk to her. It is impossible.

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