Homework

Hello, teacher. Thank you for being so concerned.^^ I guess I have worked too hard because it's the end of this semester. Anyway, I should take a rest until I will recover my codition. Could you read and review the text below? This was no different from the unification policies of the other past administrations. Nevertheless, many Korean people of those days recognized the 'Sunshine Policy' as a very different policy from the other past ones. This was because the past administrations didn’t put their policies into action in practical terms while they asserted exchanging and improving relations between two Koreas in formal terms. In this chapter, I will analyze President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which hasn’t been succeeded anymore although it was evaluated as exceptional among the past South Korean unification policies, and seek to find the implications for the unification of the Korean Peninsula. Subtitle : True Democracy: A Necessary Condition for the Unification

Hi there, Kaylee! Take care of yourself. Don\'t overwork, okay? I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Thank you for being so concerned.^^ >> CORRECT!I guess I have worked too hard because it\'s the end of this semester. >> CORRECT!Anyway, I should take a rest until I will recover my codition. >> Anyway, I should take a rest until I fully recover.Could you read and review the text below? >> CORRECT!This was no different from the unification policies of the other past administrations. >> CORRECT!Nevertheless, many Korean people of those days recognized the \'Sunshine Policy\' as a very different policy from the other past ones. >> Nevertheless, many Korean people back in those days recognized the \'Sunshine Policy\' as a very different policy from the previous ones. OR: >> Nevertheless, many Korean people back then recognized the \'Sunshine Policy\' as a very different policy from the others. This was because the past administrations didn’t put their policies into action in practical terms while they asserted exchanging and improving relations between two Koreas in formal terms.>> This was because the past administrations didn’t put their policies into action in practical terms while they asserted the exchanging and improving of relations between the two Koreas in formal terms. In this chapter, I will analyze President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which hasn’t been succeeded anymore although it was evaluated as exceptional among the past South Korean unification policies, and seek to find the implications for the unification of the Korean Peninsula.>> In this chapter, I will analyze President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which hasn’t been sustained anymore, although it was evaluated as exceptional among the past South Korean unification policies, and seek to find the implications for the unification of the Korean Peninsula.Subtitle : True Democracy: A Necessary Condition for the Unification >> CORRECT!