Homework

Hello, teacher. Could you read and review the text below? When the Korean Peninsula was divided into two Koreas, two countries were in the similar situation without the need to discuss a great country and a small one. North Korea had 20% larger territory than South Korea whereas South Korea’s population was 1.77 times more than North Korea’s. In terms of economic power, the economic scale of the North was about 2 times bigger than that of the South. The two Koreas established different political systems based on their own ideologies, namely Liberal Democracy and Socialism. Moreover, they have hoped to unify the Korean Peninsula into their own ideologies respectively. The two Koreas have strengthened their own ideologies since after divided into two countries. According to Mencius’s unification theory, however, this doesn’t provide any necessary condition for the unification of divided countries.

Hi there, Kaylee! Surprisingly, I\'m beginning to understand your paper, thanks to the examples that you have given here. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Could you read and review the text below? >> CORRECT!When the Korean Peninsula was divided into two Koreas, two countries were in the similar situation without the need to discuss a great country and a small one. >> When the Korean Peninsula was divided into two, the two countries were in similar situation without the need to discuss which one is the great country and which one is the small one.North Korea had 20% larger territory than South Korea whereas South Korea’s population was 1.77 times more than North Korea’s. >> North Korea had a 20% larger territory than South Korea, whereas South Korea’s population was 1.77 times bigger than North Korea’s. In terms of economic power, the economic scale of the North was about 2 times bigger than that of the South. >> CORRECT!The two Koreas established different political systems based on their own ideologies, namely Liberal Democracy and Socialism. >> CORRECT!Moreover, they have hoped to unify the Korean Peninsula into their own ideologies respectively. >> Moreover, they hoped to unify the Korean Peninsula into their own respective ideologies. The two Koreas have strengthened their own ideologies since after divided into two countries. >> The two Koreas have strengthened their own ideologies even after they were divided into two countries.According to Mencius’s unification theory, however, this doesn’t provide any necessary condition for the unification of divided countries. >> According to Mencius’s unification theory, however, this doesn’t provide any necessary condition for the unification of the divided countries.