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Before I begin my essay I have a question about definition and usage of the words
"sorts" in last correction of the essay
(a gaurantee of sorts in getting a job)
I don’t agree parents are the best teachers. While growing up I often heard the question who is your role model? And I used to answer that my parents are and I would like to be like them. But it has been changed as getting older because I realized old people are not perfect and they sometimes make misjudgment. First, I could notice about it when I had trouble with my parents for different ideas. Next, I met some childish old people while I was working and they weren’t nice at all and I could also see many cases caused by them on news. Meanwhile the thing I got is they are also growing up and all they face is new to them. And my parents have been facing all new things being parents so I don’t think they are the best teachers.
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of sorts (also of a sort) DEFINITION: (informal) used to describe something that is not a typical or good example of something:EXAMPLE: He managed to make a curtain of sorts out of an old sheet.
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==Teacher Charlie==
Before I begin my essay I have a question about definition and usage of the words\"sorts\" in last correction of the essay(a gaurantee of sorts in getting a job)>> Before I start with my essay, I have a question about the definition and usage of the phrase \"of sorts\" that was used in the last correction (\"...a guarantee of sorts in getting a job.\")
I don’t agree parents are the best teachers. While growing up I often heard the question who is your role model? And I used to answer that my parents are and I would like to be like them. But it has been changed as getting older because I realized old people are not perfect and they sometimes make misjudgment.
>> I don\'t agree that parents are the best teachers. When I was younger, I was often asked on who are my role models and I\'ve always answers that my parents were my role models and that I\'d like to be like them some day but as I got older, I realized that adults are not perfect and sometimes they have misconceptions about certain things.
First, I could notice about it when I had trouble with my parents for different ideas. Next, I met some childish old people while I was working and they weren’t nice at all and I could also see many cases caused by them on news.
>> For example, I have noticed that I get into arguments with my parents because of conflicting ideas and also, I have met some immature adults at work and they weren\'t at all nice. I\'ve seen many incidents on the news that were cause by these childish people.
Meanwhile the thing I got is they are also growing up and all they face is new to them. And my parents have been facing all new things being parents so I don’t think they are the best teachers.
>> As of right now, I realize that our parents are still learning and adapting when faced with new situations just like the rest of us. That is why I don\'t think they are the best teachers.
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