Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I re-registered my new class for 4 months.
I'll change the time we meet at because I have to help my son go to school in the morning during my vacation.
Anyway, see you on Monday.^^
Instead of reflecting the will of the people, the two Koreas had pursued regime security as a priority even though they claimed to advocate democracy on the surface.
As is well known, the South Korea had been governed by authoritarian dictatorship before democratization in 1987, and the North Korea is still governed by authoritarian dictatorship, a hereditary succession of three generations from [이름] Il-sung since its foundation.
The countries seeking for regime security as a priority couldn’t dispense a benevolent government to the people.
Against general expectations, [이름] Dae-jung disagreed with the idea that the unification should be the absolute goal in South Korean politics, even though he had identified the unification of the Korean Peninsula as one of his political aspirations.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Kaylee! Thank you so much for re-enrolling for our class. I appreciate it.
I\'m so over the moon that you chose to continue your English learning journey with me.
Please check my corrections with your paper below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I re-registered my new class for 4 months.
>> I registered for another 4 months of phone English class again.
OR:
>> I re-enrolled for another 4 months of phone English class with you.I\'ll change the time we meet at because I have to help my son go to school in the morning during my vacation.
>> I\'ll change my class time because I have to help my son get ready for school in the morning during my vacation.Anyway, see you on Monday.^^>> CORRECT!
Instead of reflecting the will of the people, the two Koreas had pursued regime security as a priority even though they claimed to advocate democracy on the surface.
>> CORRECT!
As is well known, the South Korea had been governed by authoritarian dictatorship before democratization in 1987, and the North Korea is still governed by authoritarian dictatorship, a hereditary succession of three generations from [이름] Il-sung since its foundation.
>> It is common knowledge that South Korea had been governed by an authoritarian dictatorship before its democratization in 1987, whereas North Korea is still governed by an authoritarian dictatorship, which is a hereditary succession of three generations from [이름] Il-sung, since its foundation.The countries seeking for regime security as a priority couldn’t dispense a benevolent government to the people.
>> CORRECT!Against general expectations, [이름] Dae-jung disagreed with the idea that the unification should be the absolute goal in South Korean politics, even though he had identified the unification of the Korean Peninsula as one of his political aspirations.
>> Against the general expectations, [이름] Dae-jung disagreed with the idea that unification should be the absolute goal in South Korean politics, even though he had identified the unification of the Korean Peninsula as one of his political aspirations.
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