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Most university graduates earn more money than less well educated people. Some people argue that this means they should pay the full cost of their education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Explain your answer in five sentences.
There are ma ny kinds of jobs. Some of them need tp be educated from university and others need to be built technical skills.But many people want to be graduates to earn more money. They probably think that graduates get more money.It`s realistically not true. Furthermore they should pay for their cost of education for several years So I disagree.
강사 첨삭
I respect your opinion on this matter. University graduates earn more money because they have invested time and effort into gaining their qualifications. Well, graduates would have knowledge, skills and training required for important jobs after a long time of studying. In this case, they can prove themselves to be a valued asset to society with their capabilities. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening.
~Teacher Chloe
Most university graduates earn more money than less well educated people. Some people argue that this means they should pay the full cost of their education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Explain your answer in five sentences.There are ma ny kinds of jobs.
>>There are many kinds of jobs.
Some of them need tp be educated from university and others need to be built technical skills.
>>Some of them require education from the university and others require technical skills needed.
But many people want to be graduates to earn more money.
>>Many people want to graduate to earn more money.
They probably think that graduates get more money.
>>They think that those who graduate from the university with a degree earn more money.
It`s realistically not true.
>>Correct!
Furthermore they should pay for their cost of education for several years So I disagree.
>>So, they pay a lot for education and I disagree.
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