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Hello, teacher. I'm really glad that you suggested for helping me about my presentation. Thank you so much!! See you tomorrow. Insisting on “Democracy first, and unification later”, he claimed that good politics in South Korea should come first before the unification. From his point of view, South Korean politics had two problems, until 1987 before democratization. One was tip-off politics, which targeted at a whole nation on the pretext of anticommunism. The other was privileged economy, which was pursued on the pretext of economic development. He thought that this politics couldn’t receive the people’s true support because tip-off politics suppresses the people’s freedom, and privileged economy must demand sacrifices of the people. Consequentially, he considered that a government which doesn’t receive the people’s true support will not unify the whole country, but rather allow some room for flourishing communism in South Korea.

Hi there, Kaylee! It\'ll be my pleasure to help you out with that presentation. I checked your writing below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher.>> CORRECT! I\'m really glad that you suggested for helping me about my presentation. >> I\'m really glad that you suggested helping me with my presentation.Thank you so much!! >> CORRECT!See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT!Insisting on “Democracy first, and unification later”, he claimed that good politics in South Korea should come first before the unification. >> CORRECT!From his point of view, South Korean politics had two problems, until 1987 before democratization.>> From his point of view, South Korea\'s politics had two problems until 1987 before the democratization. One was tip-off politics, which targeted at a whole nation on the pretext of anticommunism. >> One was the tip-off politics, which targeted a whole nation on the pretext of anti-communism.The other was privileged economy, which was pursued on the pretext of economic development. >> CORRECT!He thought that this politics couldn’t receive the people’s true support because tip-off politics suppresses the people’s freedom, and privileged economy must demand sacrifices of the people. >> He thought that this couldn’t receive the people’s true support because tip-off politics suppresses the people’s freedom, and privileged economy must demand the sacrifices of the people. Consequentially, he considered that a government which doesn’t receive the people’s true support will not unify the whole country, but rather allow some room for flourishing communism in South Korea. >> CORRECT!