homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be happy so I want to be rich.
If I would be rich, I could be happy more than now.
Of course, I am happy now but I don't have much money.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
A great Tuesday to you!
Wow, perfect sentences! Nice job Ms. [이름]. I think everybody wants to be rich except me. For most people money means happiness to them. It\'s because we are living in a material world. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to be happy so I want to be rich.
>>correct!
If I would be rich, I could be happy more than now.
>>correct!
Of course, I am happy now but I don\'t have much money.
>>correct!
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