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Related to the politics during King Injo's reign, there are three main research trends.
Among those three studies, the first and second are related to the international political order and the domestic responses about it.
The third is more related to my research questions.
They explain the political order after King Injo's Restoration by the framework of party politics.
According to these studies, coexistence among various parties was pursued as the new political order.
I admit that there was stable party politics.
However, regarding the context of monarch system, the Joseon Dynasty's political system, we need to consider the role of a king who was the main political actor in a monarch system.
To sum it up, in this research, I will pay attention to the role of a king in the process of rebuilding the political order after King Injo's restoration because I suppose this factor was strongly connected with the durability of Joseon Dynasty.
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>> CORRECT!The text below is the next part.>> CORRECT!Related to the politics during King Injo\'s reign, there are three main research trends.
>> In relation to the politics during King Injo\'s reign, there are three main research trends.Among those three studies, the first and second are related to the international political order and the domestic responses about it.
>> CORRECT!The third is more related to my research questions.
>> CORRECT!They explain the political order after King Injo\'s Restoration by the framework of party politics.
>> CORRECT!According to these studies, coexistence among various parties was pursued as the new political order.
>> CORRECT!I admit that there was stable party politics.
>>I admit that there was a stable party politics.However, regarding the context of monarch system, the Joseon Dynasty\'s political system, we need to consider the role of a king who was the main political actor in a monarch system.
>> However, regarding the context of a monarch system, which was the Joseon Dynasty\'s political system, we need to consider the role of a king who was the main political actor in the said system.To sum it up, in this research, I will pay attention to the role of a king in the process of rebuilding the political order after King Injo\'s restoration because I suppose this factor was strongly connected with the durability of Joseon Dynasty.
>> To sum it up, in this research, I will pay attention to the role of a king in the process of rebuilding the political order after King Injo\'s restoration. I believe this factor strongly affected the durability of the Joseon Dynasty.
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