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Hello Ms. [이름],

Wow, you have really great sentences in this composition! Well done, Ms. [이름]. I agree with you. I think it\'s more practical to own a house rather than a car. Enjoy your lunch later and see you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

When I was young, most adult want to have their house which don\'t have a loan.

>>When I was young, most adults want to have their own houses without loans.
So some people having car are very rich and it is luxury item in my country.

>> So people who have cars are rich since it\'s a luxury item in my country.
However nowadays most moderns don\'t want their house but they want to have their car.

>> However nowadays, most people don\'t want to have their own houses but rather they\'d like to own a car.
Especially men like luxury car despite they don\'t have their house.

>>Men especially like to have luxury cars despite not owning a house.
I can\'t understand it.

>>correct!
In my opinion, I need the house more than the car for the future.

>>correct!
So when we are young, we have to save money a lot.

>>So while we are young, we have to save a lot of money.
I think luxury item is the car in my country.

>>I think a car is a luxury item in my country.