Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Thank you for helping me prepare my presentation.
The below is the next part.
In order to develop my research, I will take a four-step procedure.
First, I will try to understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo's reign.
For this, I critically reviewed the political legitimacy of King Injo's Restoration.
Actually, I already published one article related to this topic.
Second, I will reconstruct the debates among various political actors about the political order which they wanted to rebuild.
Third, I have to clarify the concept of normalization of royal authority. I expect this would be the hardest task of the four-step procedure.
Lastly, I will trace how to actualize the political order after King Injo's restoration through the two case studies: one is the posthumous promotion of King Injo's father to Wonjong.
In fact, Wonjong hadn't been a real king.
And the other is the installation of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Kaylee! It\'s my pleasure to help you out.
I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!Thank you for helping me prepare my presentation.
>> Thank you for helping me prepare for my presentation.The below is the next part.
>> The text below is the next part of my presentation.In order to develop my research, I will take a four-step procedure.>> CORRECT!
First, I will try to understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo\'s reign.
>> CORRECT!For this, I critically reviewed the political legitimacy of King Injo\'s Restoration.
>> CORRECT!Actually, I already published one article related to this topic.
>> CORRECT!Second, I will reconstruct the debates among various political actors about the political order which they wanted to rebuild.
>> CORRECT!Third, I have to clarify the concept of normalization of royal authority.
>> CORRECT!
I expect this would be the hardest task of the four-step procedure.
>> I expect that this would be the hardest task out of all the procedures.Lastly, I will trace how to actualize the political order after King Injo\'s restoration through the two case studies: one is the posthumous promotion of King Injo\'s father to Wonjong.
>> CORRECT!In fact, Wonjong hadn\'t been a real king.>> In fact, Wonjong wasn\'t a real king.
And the other is the installation of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince.
>> The other is the inauguration of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince ____. (?)
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