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2016-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Thank you for helping me prepare my presentation. The below is the next part. In order to develop my research, I will take a four-step procedure. First, I will try to understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo's reign. For this, I critically reviewed the political legitimacy of King Injo's Restoration. Actually, I already published one article related to this topic. Second, I will reconstruct the debates among various political actors about the political order which they wanted to rebuild. Third, I have to clarify the concept of normalization of royal authority. I expect this would be the hardest task of the four-step procedure. Lastly, I will trace how to actualize the political order after King Injo's restoration through the two case studies: one is the posthumous promotion of King Injo's father to Wonjong. In fact, Wonjong hadn't been a real king. And the other is the installation of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince.

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Hello there, Kaylee! It\'s my pleasure to help you out. I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Thank you for helping me prepare my presentation. >> Thank you for helping me prepare for my presentation.The below is the next part. >> The text below is the next part of my presentation.In order to develop my research, I will take a four-step procedure.>> CORRECT! First, I will try to understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo\'s reign. >> CORRECT!For this, I critically reviewed the political legitimacy of King Injo\'s Restoration. >> CORRECT!Actually, I already published one article related to this topic. >> CORRECT!Second, I will reconstruct the debates among various political actors about the political order which they wanted to rebuild. >> CORRECT!Third, I have to clarify the concept of normalization of royal authority. >> CORRECT!  I expect this would be the hardest task of the four-step procedure. >> I expect that this would be the hardest task out of all the procedures.Lastly, I will trace how to actualize the political order after King Injo\'s restoration through the two case studies: one is the posthumous promotion of King Injo\'s father to Wonjong. >> CORRECT!In fact, Wonjong hadn\'t been a real king.>> In fact, Wonjong wasn\'t a real king. And the other is the installation of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince. >> The other is the inauguration of Prince A as the Crown Prince instead of the son of Prince ____. (?)

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