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2016-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I like to exercise. So If I have enought time, I want to excercise for example yoga and swimming. Also If I have enought time, I want to study about the trade. In the morning I would study it and in the afternoon I would excercise. I want really it. However, I don't have enought time, further I don't have enought money.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름], We many plans in life that sometimes we have to give up for one reason or another. But I think you can do your plans in the future when you have time and money. See you! Take care! ~T. Lynn   I like to exercise. >>correct!So If I have enought time, I want to excercise for example yoga and swimming. >>correct!Also If I have enought time, I want to study about the trade. >>correct!In the morning I would study it and in the afternoon I would excercise. >>correct!I want really it. >>I really want to do it.However, I don\'t have enought time, further I don\'t have enought money. >> However, I don\'t have enough time, furthermore I don\'t have enough money.

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