Homework

Good morning, teacher. Thank you for helping me with my presentation. I will do my best on next Monday. Could you review soem sentences below? Here, I began to wonder where the durability of the 조선 Dynasty after King Injo's restoration comes from. If I answer these questions, I could find out the factor which made the Joseon Dynasty last for a long time, and enjoy a stable politics. Therefore, my research hypothesis is that normalization of royal authority was pursed as the new political order after king Injo's restoration. Lastly, I'll finish my presentation mentioning some current implication of my study. Although the Politics of Joseon is not always worthy of imitation, I think the longevity and the durability are worthy of attention. Our country, Republic of Korea just has 70 years old history. I hope our country to last for a long time, and I hope my research provide an opportunity to find out the factors which make our political community last for a long time.

Hi there, Kaylee! Good luck with your presentation on Monday. Bring your A game, okay? Please review the corrections that I have made on your sentences below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT!Thank you for helping me with my presentation.>> CORRECT! I will do my best on next Monday.>> I will do my best on Monday.Could you review soem sentences below?>> CORRECT! >> Could you review the sentences below?Here, I began to wonder where the durability of the 조선 Dynasty after King Injo\'s restoration comes from.>> Here, I began to wonder where the durability of the 조선 Dynasty, after King Injo\'s restoration, came from. If I answer these questions, I could find out the factor which made the Joseon Dynasty last for a long time, and enjoy a stable politics.>> If I answer these questions, I could determine the factor which made the Joseon Dynasty last for a long time and enjoy a stable politics.Therefore, my research hypothesis is that normalization of royal authority was pursed as the new political order after king Injo\'s restoration.>> Therefore, my research hypothesis is that the normalization of royal authority was pursed as the new political order after King Injo\'s restoration.Lastly, I\'ll finish my presentation mentioning some current implication of my study. >> I would like to end my presentation by mentioning some current implications of my study.Although the Politics of Joseon is not always worthy of imitation, I think the longevity and the durability are worthy of attention. >> CORRECT!Our country, Republic of Korea just has 70 years old history. >> Our country, the Republic of Korea, only has 70 years of history. OR: >> Our country, the Republic of Korea, only has a 70-year-old history. I hope our country to last for a long time, and I hope my research provide an opportunity to find out the factors which make our political community last for a long time. >> I hope our country would last for a long time and I hope my research could provide an opportunity to determine the factors which could make our political community last for a long time.