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The text below is the next part of my paper. For him, what is really important for accomplishing the unification was to produce a government which receive the people’s true expectations, and then realize a benevolent government in South Korea. In this regard, this paper argues that what [이름] Dae-jung devoted his life to democratization of South Korea is not only for achieving democratization itself, but also for realizing a benevolent government as a prerequisite of the unification in the Korean Peninsula. President [이름] Dae-jung externally made clear that the South Korean government will carry out the unification policy, namely the Sunshine Policy, in his speech at the Free University of Berlin in March 2000. For the purpose of overcoming the past relations, which were limited to humanitarian assistance and interchange, [이름] Dae-jung issued “Declaration on inter-Korean Reconciliation and Cooperation for Peace and Unification on the Korean Peninsula”, namely “Berlin Declaration”.

Hi there, Kaylee! I checked your writing below. Please review my corrections. ~Teacher Marie~ The text below is the next part of my paper.>> CORRECT!For him, what is really important for accomplishing the unification was to produce a government which receive the people’s true expectations, and then realize a benevolent government in South Korea. >> For him, the importance of the unification was to produce a government which will receive the people’s true expectations, and then to realize a benevolent government in South Korea.In this regard, this paper argues that what [이름] Dae-jung devoted his life to democratization of South Korea is not only for achieving democratization itself, but also for realizing a benevolent government as a prerequisite of the unification in the Korean Peninsula.>> In this regard, this paper argues that the reason why [이름] Dae-jung devoted his life to the democratization of South Korea was not only to achieve democratization itself, but also to realize a benevolent government as a prerequisite of the unification in the Korean Peninsula.President [이름] Dae-jung externally made clear that the South Korean government will carry out the unification policy, namely the Sunshine Policy, in his speech at the Free University of Berlin in March 2000. >> President [이름] Dae-jung strongly made it clear that the South Korean government will carry out the unification policy, namely the Sunshine Policy, in his speech at the Free University of Berlin in March 2000.For the purpose of overcoming the past relations, which were limited to humanitarian assistance and interchange, [이름] Dae-jung issued “Declaration on inter-Korean Reconciliation and Cooperation for Peace and Unification on the Korean Peninsula”, namely “Berlin Declaration”. >> For the purpose of overcoming the past relations, which were limited to humanitarian assistance and interchange, [이름] Dae-jung issued the “Declaration on inter-Korean Reconciliation and Cooperation for Peace and Unification on the Korean Peninsula”, also known as the “Berlin Declaration”.