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2016-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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These days I feel that my job is very boring. So I had to think it. I don't try to learn about my job. That is reason. I decided that I will try to learn and study about my job again. I think It is one of the most exciting jobs.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름],

I hope everything\'s okay with you and your family. In my opinion, it\'s up to you to make your job exciting or more interesting. But if you really are bored with it, you will be less enthusiastic to go to work thus your performance level will be low. Anyway, let\'s go to work! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

These days I feel that my job is very boring.

>>correct!
So I had to think it.

>>So I had to think about it.
I don\'t try to learn about my job.

>>correct!
That is reason.

>>That is the reason.
I decided that I will try to learn and study about my job again.

>>correct!
I think It is one of the most exciting jobs.

>>correct!

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