homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am afried to meet new people.
I prefer to hang out with people I already know people becaese I am shy.
I want to change it.
I want to meet new people and I will try it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름],
Meeting new people is hard if you are a shy person. But we could overcome this. Meeting new people is fun and you learn also from them. So go on and do the first move. Say hello to somebody new at work. That\'s a start.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I am afried to meet new people.
>>correct! (spelling:afraid)
I prefer to hang out with people I already know people becaese I am shy.
>>I prefer to hang out with people I already know because I am shy.
I want to change it.
>>correct!
I want to meet new people and I will try it.
>>correct!
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