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학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I agree.
I hope that my children visit a lot of countries while they grow up.
I hope that they learn during visiting.
I couldn't do it.
So I am regreting it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Were you tired from work again last night? Take care of yourself so that you will not get sick. Remember you are a supermom so you can\'t get sick. Enjoy your breakfast! See you!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Yes, I agree.
>>correct!
I hope that my children visit a lot of countries while they grow up.
>>I hope my children visit a lot of countries while they are growing up.
I hope that they learn during visiting.
>>I hope that they learn something during their visits/while visiting other countries.
I couldn\'t do it.
>>correct!
So I am regretting it.
>>correct!
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