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2016-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Nobody's perfect. Even if a person never perfect, it can achieve some except few, such as immortal life. how bummed it is that people can not reach their goal because they are not perfect? But I think , there are no one being perfect for the goal. For instance, love is complicated and need a incredible effort and being a lover for somebody can be a huge goal to somebody, but it is not required perfection for somebody to achieve a love. Pedantic which means to chase only perfection and much care all details as well are not effective always. Everybody deserve dream come true. People just need to have a passion and a gut to try and to do hardworking on their field

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Hello there [이름]! ^^Thank you very much for doing your homework. In my opinion, being perfect and aiming to be perfect are two different things. When you are perfect, it means you are already capable of doing all things; even the impossible ones!But, if you are aiming to be perfect, it means you have the burning desire to achieve the things that you want. For me, aiming to be perfect is a good way to motivate yourself to go after your goals and succeed. Seeking after perfection could lead to a breakthrough and sometimes, you have to be a bit hard on yourself for this to come true. Most people don\'t want to go after difficult things because they\'re difficult to accomplish. But people who aim to be perfect are different. They get out of their comfort zones and go after the things that they want no matter how uncomfortable it might be. Thank you for this composition [이름]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. ~Teacher Charry (^__^) Nobody\'s perfect. >> CORRECT! OR >> Nobody\'s born perfect. Even if a person never perfect, it can achieve some except few, such as immortal life. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Even if a person is perfect, he can never achieve a few things in this world such as immortal life. how bummed it is that people can not reach their goal because they are not perfect?>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Is it such a bummer for some people who cannot reach their goals just because they are not perfect?But I think , there are no one being perfect for the goal. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But I think, you don\'t have to be perfect to reach a goal. For instance, love is complicated and need a incredible effort and being a lover for somebody can be a huge goal to somebody, but it is not required perfection for somebody to achieve a love. >> For instance, love is complicated and needs an incredible effort. Being a lover to somebody can be a huge goal to some people but it is not required of you to be perfect to achieve love. OR >> For instance, love is a complicated matter that requires great effort. Being a lover to somebody can be a huge goal to some people but the good thing about it is that, you don\'t have to be perfect to achieve love. Pedantic which means to chase only perfection and much care all details as well are not effective always.>> Being pedantic which means to chase only perfection and to put too much care on all details are not effective always.Everybody deserve dream come true. >> Everybody deserves their dreams to come true. People just need to have a passion and a gut to try and to do hardworking on their field >> People just need to have a passion and a gut to try and to do hardwork on their field.

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