homework

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: The following passage contains 10 mistakes, such as grammatical errors, wrong prepositions and conjunctions. Correct the mistakes and rewrite the correct version of this passage. Last night, three trekkers (1) went missing while (2) descended the trail from the towering mountain. Immediately, the next day, a search party (3) meets at the foot of the mountain. It will (4) conduct a search for the missing persons. But, the (5) unpredictable weather will hamper the search. The mists (6) are thick. (7) Besides , the wind is strong. Visibility (8) has to be very bad. The missing persons were (9) feared dead. The police have just informed the families. Everybody (10) is praying and hoping the three trekkers would be safe.

Hi there, Alec!Thanks for your composition! Here are the corrections. Please be guided. Have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Last night, three trekkers (1) went missing while (2) descended the trail from the towering mountain. >> Last night, three trekkers (1. went - correct) missing while (2. descending) the trail from the towering mountain. Immediately, the next day, a search party (3) meets at the foot of the mountain. >> Immediately, the next day, a search party (3. met) at the foot of the mountain. It will (4) conduct a search for the missing persons. >> Correct But, the (5) unpredictable weather will hamper the search. >> Correct The mists (6) are thick. >> Correct (7) Besides , the wind is strong. >> Correct Visibility (8) has to be very bad. >> Visibility (8. can) be very bad. The missing persons were (9) feared dead. >> Correct The police have just informed the families. >> Correct Everybody (10) is praying and hoping the three trekkers would be safe. >> Correct