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2016-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I think the museum shows well about the features of the country people visit to because there are lots of the heritages and well written history of the country and it will help visitors understand some places they visit in easily. In my experiences, when I traveled to China and Taiwan I also visited historical places and museums which were about their heritages and history, and museum staffs gave me an explanation of the stuffs and stories. It was very helpful to understand the place and more enjoyable. It is why most travel agencies always involve the course of touring museums or historical places.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   Here you go and see you on Friday! ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I think museum show well about the features of the country people visit to because there are lots of the heritages and well written history of the country and it will help visitors understand some places they visit in easily. >> I think museums show the best features of a country to people who are visiting it because it showcases the heritage and the written history of the country and it will help tourists understand the place they visit easily.   In my experiences, when I traveled to China and Taiwan I also visited historical places and museums which were about their heritages and history, and museum staffs gave me an explanation of the stuffs and stories. It was very helpful to understand the place and more enjoyable. >> During my travels to China and Taiwan, I visited historical places and museums which featured their heritage and history. The museum staff also gave me descriptions and stories about the items there. It was very helpful in understanding the place and made the experience even more enjoyable.   It is why most travel agencies always involve the course of touring museums or historical places. >> This is why most travel agencies include trips to museums and historic place in their itineraries.

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