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2016-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Hello Charlie Before I start an essay, I have a question the word showcase from last correction was it verb in the sentence? As i checked it has only noun form. I have been usually thinking of what need to change in my hometown. If I could change one important thing I would change policy of a region. The city is seeking to make an industrial town and promoting workers. Moreover companies try to set up industrial complex more and they even reclaim land from the sea. Of course there are the biggest shipbuilding companies in Korea, but the region has many good sights and beaches and I believe that it has a possibility of being a beautiful sightseeing city like Jeju. I would manage many beaches including accommodations and natural parks. I think it will be better for the future economy of my hometown.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   Thank you for your essay and that is a good question. ^^ There are words in English that can be used as a noun and as a verb; \"showcase\" is one of these verbs. As a noun, \'showcase\' is defined as an event, occasion, etc., that shows the abilities or good qualities of someone or something in an attractive or favorable way ( usually + for) EXAMPLE:     The program is a showcase for up-and-coming musicians.    The movie is a showcase for her talents. As a verb, \'showcase\' means to show (something or someone) in an attractive or favorable way (used with + object )  EXAMPLE: The program showcases up-and-coming musicians.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I have been usually thinking of what need to change in my hometown. If I could change one important thing I would change policy of a region. The city is seeking to make an industrial town and promoting workers. Moreover companies try to set up industrial complex more and they even reclaim land from the sea. >> I have caught myself usually thinking of what I would change in my hometown and decided that I would change the programs and policies governing the region. The city seeks to be an industrial town where more industrial complexes would be built to the cost of reclaiming land from the sea.   Of course there are the biggest shipbuilding companies in Korea, but the region has many good sights and beaches and I believe that it has a possibility of being a beautiful sightseeing city like Jeju. I would manage many beaches including accommodations and natural parks. I think it will be better for the future economy of my hometown. >> One of the major shipbuilding companies of Korea is found here but the region still has plenty of good sights and beaches and I believe that the town has the potential of being as beautiful  as Jeju along with the resorts and natural parks. I would manage one of the tourists accomodations but I digress. My point being is that I think it would be a more stable means of economy for my hometown.

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