Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
My father came back home today. So, I am very glad.^^
The text below is the next part of my paper.
Like the second stage of Mencius’s unification theory, in which a benevolent government in one country is known to foreign countries, the Sunshine Policy has the expectations that good politics of South Korea could be expanded outside and reach North Korea.
In other words, if South Korea continues to exchange and cooperate with North Korea, the people of North Korea will finally recognize how good the South Korea’s politics is.
The quantitative results of the Sunshine Policy often receive attention.
However, [이름] Dae-jung had a strong tendency to regard a change of the people’s sympathy, particularly the North Korea people’s, as a true meaning of the Sunshine Policy.
In his last autobiography, [이름] Dae-jung described his political life as “realization of democracy, economic recovery, and blazing a trail of inter-Korean reconciliation”.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee. Good to hear that your father is back from his trip.
Review my corrections below.
~Teache Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!My father came back home today.
>> CORRECT!
So, I am very glad.^^>> CORRECT!The text below is the next part of my paper.>> CORRECT!Like the second stage of Mencius’s unification theory, in which a benevolent government in one country is known to foreign countries, the Sunshine Policy has the expectations that good politics of South Korea could be expanded outside and reach North Korea.
>> Like the second stage of Mencius’s unification theory, in which a benevolent government in one country is known to foreign countries, the Sunshine Policy has the expectations that the good politics of South Korea could expand and reach North Korea.
In other words, if South Korea continues to exchange and cooperate with North Korea, the people of North Korea will finally recognize how good the South Korea’s politics is.
>> In other words, if South Korea continues to cooperate and communicate with North Korea, the people of North Korea will finally recognize how good South Korea’s politics is.The quantitative results of the Sunshine Policy often receive attention.
>> CORRECT!However, [이름] Dae-jung had a strong tendency to regard a change of the people’s sympathy, particularly the North Korea people’s, as a true meaning of the Sunshine Policy. >> However, [이름] Dae-jung had a strong tendency to regard a change in the people’s sympathy, particularly the North Koreans\', as a true meaning of the Sunshine Policy. In his last autobiography, [이름] Dae-jung described his political life as “realization of democracy, economic recovery, and blazing a trail of inter-Korean reconciliation”.
>> In his last autobiography, [이름] Dae-jung described his political life as a “realization of democracy, economic recovery, and blazing a trail of inter-Korean reconciliation”.
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