homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. If I study, I will pass the exams.
2. If the sun shine, we will talk into town.
3. If he has a temperature, he will see the doctor.
4. If my friends come, I will be very happy.
5. If she earn a lot of money, she will fly to New York.
6. If we travel to London, we will visit the museums.
7. If you wear sandals in the mountains, you will slip on the rocks.
8. If Rita forget her homework, the teacher will give her a low mark.
9. If they go to the disco, they will listen to loud music.
10.If you wait a minute, I will ask my parents.
Hi Sophia
I have long resting period because of my private reason.
Sorry about abrupt inform.
I hope we will meet soon.
Thanks.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
I felt sad when you put your class on hold.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hi Sophia
>> I have long resting period because of my private reason.
>> I need to take a rest because of some personal reasons.Sorry about abrupt inform.
>> Sorry for an abrupt or sudden plan.I hope we will meet soon.
>> I hope that we will meet soon.Thanks.
>> Thank you1. If I study, I will pass the exams.
>> CORRECT 2. If the sun shine, we will talk into town.
>> If th sun shines, we will walk into town.3. If he has a temperature, he will see the doctor.
>> CORRECT 4. If my friends come, I will be very happy.
>> CORRECT 5. If she earn a lot of money, she will fly to New York.>> If she earns a lot of money, she will fly to New York.
6. If we travel to London, we will visit the museums.
>> CORRECT 7. If you wear sandals in the mountains, you will slip on the rocks.
>> CORRECT 8. If Rita forget her homework, the teacher will give her a low mark.
>> If Rita forgets her homework, the teacher will give her a low mark. 9. If they go to the disco, they will listen to loud music.
>> CORRECT 10.If you wait a minute, I will ask my parents.
>> CORRECT
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