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Hello Charlie^ ^
I think there was an error in last corrction because your correction seemed to be cut off...
I agree that universities should give the same quality about the sports activities as much as their university libraries. What students usually do is playing sports game and studying and they spend most of their time in their universities for almost four years, first of all they pay great amount of money to register the classes. I think most universities just invest to build library and some educational places. My university also didn’t have good places for sports activities and I surely couldn’t see students doing sports, while I could see other students playing sports in another university well. Then students have to find the place they can do sports activities. As far as I know my university’s registration fee is more expensive. So universities should spend the same amount of money to build sports facility.
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Hello there [이름]! ^^
Thank you for calling my attention to that error. I put it into rights and you may check it again. ^^
Looking forward to seeing you later!
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think there was an error in last corrction because your correction seemed to be cut off...>> I think an error occured in the last correction because it seemed cut off.I agree that universities should give the same quality about the sports activities as much as their university libraries. What students usually do is playing sports game and studying and they spend most of their time in their universities for almost four years,
>> I agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their students\' sports activities as they give to their university libraries since students usually spend four years in university playing sports and studying.
first of all they pay great amount of money to register the classes. I think most universities just invest to build library and some educational places. My university also didn’t have good places for sports activities and I surely couldn’t see students doing sports, while I could see other students playing sports in another university well. Then students have to find the place they can do sports activities. As far as I know my university’s registration fee is more expensive. So universities should spend the same amount of money to build sports facility.
>> Besides that, students also pay high tuition fees so I think universities shouldn\'t just invest in building libraries or educational facilities but also invest in sports facilities as well. In my university, the tuition fee was rather high but we didn\'t have good sports facilities so you wouldn\'t see students practicing sports there. The students in my university had to look for places where they can practice their respective sports.
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