homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hi Teacher,
please see my e-mail as below.
We did some test to see if there’s no problem with operation with other kitchen components.
One issue McD Korea worried about was the possibility that the screw may dropped into and mixed with food product.
There’s no test for KC performed.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sarah!
Thank you for sharing this again.
Just capitalize the first letter of the first word when starting a sentence.
Only minor corrections here.
I\'ll see you later.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
hi Teacher,>> Hi teacher,
please see my e-mail as below.>> Please see my e-mail below.
>> Or: Please take a look at my e-mail below.We did some test to see if there’s no problem with operation with other kitchen components.
>> We did some test to see if there’s no problem with the operation of other kitchen components.One issue McD Korea worried about was the possibility that the screw may dropped into and mixed with food product.
>> One issue that McDonald\'s Korea is worried about is the possibility that the screw may drop into and mix with other food products.There’s no test for KC performed.
>> Correct
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