homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher Sophia. Today is rainy day in Korea. It's pouring outside. What's the weather like there? You said Blue has been always used in a negative connotation. Today is a blue day, a gloomy day because of the rain. However, I like heavy rain and I love to watch outside just at home. I enjoy a blue day but I hate hitting rain.
Today's topic is a little difficult but I'm waiting for talking about it in our class. See you a few minutes!
1. We call our dog.
2. Emma dreams in the lessons.
3. They look at birds.
4. John comes home from school.
5. I meet my friends.
6. He repairs the laptop.
7. Walter and Frank say hello.
8. The cat sits under the tree.
9. You drink water.
10. She forgets the lunchbox.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],There are certain days and certain seasons that can lead many people to feel blue and depressed. Rainy days naturally are less light. So this may mix the serotonin signals in our brains. If dark means sleep, then a rainy, gloomy day tends to tell our bodies it is time to rest. The sound of the rain hitting a roof or window is also like a natural lullaby, encouraging us to relax. In our high-pressure, sleep-deprived world, slowing down may help us realize how tired we really are. Feelings of depression and tiredness may come from your inability to get outside or the fact that rain makes it harder to get where you are going without getting wet. Or it could also be the sign of a deeper problem.If you are feeling very depressed or the depression lasts for several days or week, it is important to seek the advice of a doctor. Depression can be a serious issue. If you think you might be suffering from it, your doctor is your best source for answers and ideas for helping you to feel better.
Don\'t wait. Seek the help you need to feel better. Rainy day and Monday blues come to all of us.
Finding ways to cope and overcome will lead to a happier, healthier life.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hello, teacher Sophia.
>>
Today is rainy day in Korea.
>> It\'s raining in Korea now.
It\'s pouring outside.
>> It\'s raining cats and dogs.
What\'s the weather like there?
>> CORRECT
You said Blue has been always used in a negative connotation.
>> You said that the color \"blue\" has been always used in a negative connotation.
Today is a blue day, a gloomy day because of the rain.
>> CORRECT
However, I like heavy rain and I love to watch outside just at home.
>> However, I like the atmosphere if it\'s raining cats and dogs outside. I love watching things outside our home.
I enjoy a blue day but I hate hitting rain.
>> I enjoy a gloomy day but I hate getting wet in the rain.Today\'s topic is a little difficult but I\'m waiting for talking about it in our class.
>> Today\'s topic is a bit difficult but I\'m waiting for you to talk about this in the class.
See you a few minutes!
>> See you in few minutes.Here are the answers:1. We call our dog.
>> CORRECT 2. Emma dreams in the lessons.
>> CORRECT 3. They look at birds.
>> CORRECT 4. John comes home from school.
>> CORRECT 5. I meet my friends.
>> CORRECT 6. He repairs the laptop.
>> CORRECT 7. Walter and Frank say hello.
>> CORRECT 8. The cat sits under the tree.
>> CORRECT 9. You drink water.
>> CORRECT 10. She forgets the lunchbox.
>> CORRECT
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