Homework

Hello, teacher. It is still raining in my city. Thre is a small river near my apartment. The water level of the river is very high. Accodring to the TV news, there are a lot of damages in Korea due to this rain. The text below is the next part of my paper. I'd like to check my comositions although my presentation was over. ^^ Furthermore, this tendency seems to last until now, when we recently hear the news about the two Korea’s strained relationship. This shows that South Korea gave up the Mencius’s way of unification before entering the third step of it. The South Korean government announced to change keynote of policy toward North Korea because the North Korean government has never changed since the Sunshine Policy although the North Koreans’ perceptions toward South Korea has changed a great deal in recent years. Military tension between the two Koreas existed even during practicing the Sunshine Policy, and the North Korea is still progressing nuclear development.

Hi there, Kaylee! Be extra careful when you go out today. Accident rates go up in rainy weather. Take care! I checked your composition below. Review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It is still raining in my city.>> CORRECT! Thre is a small river near my apartment. >> CORRECT!The water level of the river is very high. >> CORRECT!Accodring to the TV news, there are a lot of damages in Korea due to this rain.>> According to the news on TV, there has been a lot of damages in Korea because of this rain.The text below is the next part of my paper. >> CORRECT!I\'d like to check my comositions although my presentation was over. ^^>> I\'d like you to check my compositions even though my presentation was over.Furthermore, this tendency seems to last until now, when we recently hear the news about the two Korea’s strained relationship. >> Furthermore, this tendency seems to continue until now because we still hear some recent news about the two Korea’s strained relationship.This shows that South Korea gave up the Mencius’s way of unification before entering the third step of it. >> This shows that South Korea gave up on Mencius’s way of unification before entering the third step.The South Korean government announced to change keynote of policy toward North Korea because the North Korean government has never changed since the Sunshine Policy although the North Koreans’ perceptions toward South Korea has changed a great deal in recent years. >> The South Korean government announced changing the keynote of policy toward North Korea. This is because its government never changed since the implementation of the Sunshine Policy, although the North Koreans’ perception of South Korea changed a great deal in recent years.Military tension between the two Koreas existed even during practicing the Sunshine Policy, and the North Korea is still progressing nuclear development. >> Military tension between the two Koreas existed even during the implementation of the Sunshine Policy and North Korea still developed nuclear weapons.