Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It's likely to clear up, so I'm relieved.^^
Could you read and review the text below?
Mencius says that if a great country is a perfectly virtuous prince, it cannot help serving a small country even though a small country doesn’t serve a great one.
From the modern point of view, there could be a controversy about what are the criteria to distinguish a small country and a great one.
However, there is no question that South Korea is relatively closer to a great country than North Korea even if it is not supported by the quantitative evidences such as the National Power Index.
In this regard, the Sunshine Policy can be interpreted that South Korea, as a great country, had practiced “serving a small country” to North Korea.
As the logical structure of Mencius’s unification theory shows, the key to unification is direction of public sentiment and their support.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! I thought your presentation was finished. Haha. It seems like it\'s far from over.
Anyway, check my corrections below.
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!It\'s likely to clear up, so I\'m relieved.^^>> CORRECT!Could you read and review the text below?>> CORRECT!Mencius says that if a great country is a perfectly virtuous prince, it cannot help serving a small country even though a small country doesn’t serve a great one.
>> Mencius says that if a great country has a perfectly virtuous prince, it cannot help serving a small country even though it doesn’t serve a great one.From the modern point of view, there could be a controversy about what are the criteria to distinguish a small country and a great one.
>> From the modern point of view, there could be a controversy about the criteria that distinguishes a small country from a great one.However, there is no question that South Korea is relatively closer to a great country than North Korea even if it is not supported by the quantitative evidences such as the National Power Index.
>> However, there is no question that South Korea is relatively closer to a great country than North Korea, even if it is not supported by quantitative evidences, such as the National Power Index.In this regard, the Sunshine Policy can be interpreted that South Korea, as a great country, had practiced “serving a small country” to North Korea.
>> CORRECT!As the logical structure of Mencius’s unification theory shows, the key to unification is direction of public sentiment and their support. >> As the logical structure of Mencius’s unification theory shows, the key to unification is the direction of public sentiment and their support.
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