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2016-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I searched the meaning of Nepartak. The typhoon Nepartak is from the word of Micronesia. It is the name of a famous warrior in Kosrae island.^^ The text below is the last part of my paper. You don't need to review this paper from tomorrow. I really appreciate your big help. Thank you so much!!^^ According to this theory, what we can do for the unification in the Korean Peninsula is to develop our good politics in South Korea. Then, we are able to make the North Koreans recognize the difference of quality in politics between the two Koreas. Unfortunately, the Sunshine Policy as a process toward unification in the Korean Peninsula was scrapped because of a regime change before harvesting its fruits. However, there still remains a possibility to practice Mencius’s way of unification in modern terms. This is because South Korea, unlike North Korea, became a true democratic society that can change a government regularly by the will of the people.

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Hi there, Kaylee! That typhoon\'s name is kind of weird. Thank you for looking it up for me. I reviewed your writing below. You did very well here. I\'m glad that I was able to help you (even if it was just a little bit) with this paper. Don\'t worry about it. It was my pleasure. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I searched the meaning of Nepartak. >> CORRECT!The typhoon Nepartak is from the word of Micronesia. >> The name of the typhoon, Nepartak, came from a Micronesian word.It is the name of a famous warrior in Kosrae island.^^>> CORRECT!The text below is the last part of my paper. >> CORRECT!You don\'t need to review this paper from tomorrow.>> You don\'t need to review this paper starting tomorrow. I really appreciate your big help. >> CORRECT!Thank you so much!!^^>> CORRECT!According to this theory, what we can do for the unification in the Korean Peninsula is to develop our good politics in South Korea. >> According to this theory, what we can do to achieve unification between the two Koreas is to develop our good politics in South Korea.Then, we are able to make the North Koreans recognize the difference of quality in politics between the two Koreas. >> Through this, we can make the North Koreans realize the difference of the quality of politics between the two Koreas.Unfortunately, the Sunshine Policy as a process toward unification in the Korean Peninsula was scrapped because of a regime change before harvesting its fruits. >> Unfortunately, the Sunshine Policy, as a process of unification in the Korean Peninsula, was scrapped because of a regime change before reaping its fruits. However, there still remains a possibility to practice Mencius’s way of unification in modern terms. >> CORRECT! OR:>> However, there is still a possibility of practicing Mencius\'s way of unification in modern times.This is because South Korea, unlike North Korea, became a true democratic society that can change a government regularly by the will of the people. >> CORRECT!

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