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2016-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Make one sentence from two. Use who/whom/that/which. 1. A girl was injured in the accident. She is now in hospital.  A girl was injured in the accident who is now in hospital. 2. A man answered the phone who told me you were away.  A man answered the phone. He told me you were away. 3. A waitress served us. She was very impolite and impatient.  A waitress served us who was very impolite and impatient 4. A building was destroyed in the fire. It has now been rebuilt.  A building was destroyed in the fire which has now been rebuilt. 5. Some people were arrested. They have now been released.  Some people were arrested that have now been released.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Alec! Thanks for your composition! You are very diligent and I commend you for that. Keep it up! T. JanE ^^ 1. A girl was injured in the accident. She is now in hospital. A girl was injured in the accident who is now in hospital.>> The girl who was injured in the accident is now in hospital. 2. A man answered the phone who told me you were away. A man answered the phone. He told me you were away.>> The man who/that answered the phone told me you were away. 3. A waitress served us. She was very impolite and impatient. A waitress served us who was very impolite and impatient>> The waitress who/that served us was very impolite and impatient. 4. A building was destroyed in the fire. It has now been rebuilt. A building was destroyed in the fire which has now been rebuilt.>> The building that/which was destroyed in the fire has now been rebuilt. 5. Some people were arrested. They have now been released. Some people were arrested that have now been released. >> The people who/that were arrested have now been released.   

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