Homework

Hello, teacher. It was good to ride a cable car at Solak mountain last weekend. I think it is the best way to climb the mountain quickly and efficiently. Futhermore, the scenery at the top of the mountain was really fantastic. What is the best thing for me is that I spent quality time with my parents and my son. Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? I think that the government doesn't need to adjust the applicants' results for the job. However, the hiring process and standards for employment should be reexamine if they are unfair for women or not. That is to say, we don't need to pursue intentional and inefficient equality of outcome. However, we have to observe if our society provides the equal opportunities for both genders. If the hiring process and standards for employment are fair for both genders, we should accept the result that a certain gender has more competitive than other gender.

Hi there, Kaylee! I bet you enjoyed your trip to Seorak mountain. No sweat, right? Haha! Thanks for doing your homework! You shared some practical and sensible thoughts here. Good job! Kindly check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!It was good to ride a cable car at Solak mountain last weekend. >> The cable car ride to Seorak mountain last weekend was good.I think it is the best way to climb the mountain quickly and efficiently. >> CORRECT!Futhermore, the scenery at the top of the mountain was really fantastic. >> CORRECT! >> FurthermoreWhat is the best thing for me is that I spent quality time with my parents and my son.>> The best thing about it for me is that I got to spend quality time with my parents and my son.Most high level jobs are done by men. >> CORRECT! Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?>> CORRECT!I think that the government doesn\'t need to adjust the applicants\' results for the job. >> CORRECT!However, the hiring process and standards for employment should be reexamine if they are unfair for women or not. >> However, the hiring process and standards for employment should be reexamined and checked whether they are unfair for women or not.That is to say, we don\'t need to pursue intentional and inefficient equality of outcome. >> CORRECT!However, we have to observe if our society provides equal opportunities for both genders. >> CORRECT!If the hiring process and standards for employment are fair for both genders, we should accept the result that a certain gender has more competitive than other gender. >> If the hiring process and standards for employment are fair for both genders, we should accept the fact that one gender is more competitive than the other.