Homework

Hello, teacher. It is likely to be very hot today. The temperature is already over 30 degrees this morning. Of course, I know that this is a drop in the ocean compared to the weather in the Philippines. Should students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools?Why? Why not? In my opinion, it is not desirable for students to have cell phones in elementary and high schools. Moreover, the same holds true for university students. Using a cell phone obviously makes the students not to concentrate on their class. Some students might use a cell phone as means of assistance while studying. However, most students use a cell phone to have a conversation through SNS applications or play the online games during school hours. I believe that their use of a cell phone during school hours needs to be monitored by their teachers and parents. For students, there is nothing urgent than focusing on their studies. I guess they can hold using a cell phone after class.

Hello there, Kaylee! I have to commend you for your excellent use of idioms in this composition. Well done! Thanks for doing your homework. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It is likely to be very hot today. >> CORRECT! The temperature is already over 30 degrees this morning. >> CORRECT! Of course, I know that this is a drop in the ocean compared to the weather in the Philippines. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, it is not desirable for students to have cell phones in elementary and high schools. >> CORRECT! Moreover, the same holds true for university students. >> CORRECT! Using a cell phone obviously makes the students not to concentrate on their class. >> Using a cell phone can obviously affect the students\' concentration in their class.Some students might use a cell phone as means of assistance while studying. >> Some students might use their cell phones to assist them in studying.However, most students use a cell phone to have a conversation through SNS applications or play the online games during school hours. >> However, most students use their cell phones to have a conversation through SNS applications or to play online games during school hours.I believe that their use of a cell phone during school hours needs to be monitored by their teachers and parents. >> I believe that the use of cell phones during school hours needs to be monitored by their teachers and parents.For students, there is nothing urgent than focusing on their studies. >> For students, there is nothing more important than focusing on their studies.I guess they can hold using a cell phone after class. >> I guess they can use their cell phones after class.