homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
How are you? Thank you so much for your concern.^^
I am so sorry that I missed our class yesterday. I am looking forward to talking to you later.
See you!
~Teacher Shanee
When you need money, you can borrow from a bank, but be prepared to pay high interest.
>>> Correct!
Banks don\'t lend money as a favor.
>>> Correct!
They charge for the loan. Only friends may lend money as a favor.
>>> Correct!
If you borrow money from a friend, be prepared to return the favor one day.
>>> Correct!
Your friend may also ask you to lend him some money when he doesn\'t want to borrow from a bank.
>>> Correct!
On that occasion, you either lend him money or you lose a friend.
>>> Correct!
Don\'t get sick, sir Shanee.
>>> Don\'t get sick, Ma\'am Shanee. [Sir is used for men. Also, you can just call me Shanee or Teacher Shanee.kkk]
I hope you\'ll get well soon , take care~!
>>> I hope you\'ll get well soon. Take care!~
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