Homework

Hello, teacher. It was cool for a while after the rain yesterday. Now, it started to be hot again in Seoul. Are we too dependent on computers?Why? Why not? Whether or not we're aware of it, there are a lot of computers around us such as smart phones, automatic ticket machines and automated teller machines. As the examples show, most computers exist to assist humankind and to make people's lives better. However, the problem is that we have been too dependent on computers as time goes by. Forgetting a close friend's phone number is very common, and this is generally caused by too smart 'smart phone' which memorizes all phone numbers of one's friends and family members. Although computers are the devices to make people lives better, there needs a sense of independence using these smart devices. This is because we hope that we still would be the owners to use computers in the future.

Hi there, Kaylee! I couldn\'t agree more with what you said here. I have to commend you for this very practical and realistic answer. Well done! I\'m also guilty of relying too much on my smartphone to remind me about my family and friends\' birthdays or any other special occasions. Thanks for doing your homework. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!It was cool for a while after the rain yesterday.>> CORRECT! Now, it started to be hot again in Seoul.>> Now, it\'s starting to get hot again here in Seoul.Whether or not we\'re aware of it, there are a lot of computers around us such as smart phones, automatic ticket machines and automated teller machines. >> Whether or not we\'re aware of it, we are surrounded by computers such as smart phones, automatic ticket machines and automated teller machines.As the examples show, most computers exist to assist humankind and to make people\'s lives better. >> As the examples show, most computers exist to assist mankind and to make people\'s lives better.However, the problem is that we have been too dependent on computers as time goes by. >> However, the problem is that we have become too dependent on computers as time goes by.Forgetting a close friend\'s phone number is very common, and this is generally caused by too smart \'smart phone\' which memorizes all the phone numbers of one\'s friends and family members. >> CORRECT!Although computers are the devices to make people lives better, there needs a sense of independence using these smart devices. >> Although computers are devices that make people\'s lives better, we need a sense of independence when it comes to using these smart devices.This is because we hope that we still would be the owners to use computers in the future. >> This is because we still hope to be the owners (and not the slaves) of these computers in the future. *I\'m not sure if this is what you meant in this sentence.