Homework

Hello, teacher. Could you read and review my letter below? I'm considering to study in Malaysia for a while. So, I'm sending an e-mail requesting some information about it. The purpose of this letter is to request some information about your exchange program for postgraduate students. As I mentioned above, I'm majoring in Korean political thought, so I'm very interested in Korean studies in University of Malaya. However, I couldn't find any information that students can study Korean studies as an exchange student. I'd like to know if I could study that field in your university as a postgraduate exchange student. Unfortunately, I didn't find out yet what I want to know on your website. I am aware of the fact that my university is not your partner university which can exchange students each other. However, if your university allows for me to study in University of Malaya, my university, Korea University, could send an official letter and documents which you request.

Hi there, Kaylee! I reviewed your letter below. Take note of proper capitalization. Check my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Could you read and review my letter below?>> CORRECT! I\'m considering to study in Malaysia for a while.>> I\'m considering studying in Malaysia for a while. So, I\'m sending an e-mail requesting some information about it.>> CORRECT!The purpose of this letter is to request some information about your exchange program for postgraduate students. >> CORRECT!As I mentioned above, I\'m majoring in Korean political thought, so I\'m very interested in Korean studies in University of Malaya. >> As I mentioned above, I\'m majoring in Korean Political Thoughts, so I\'m very interested in Korean Studies in the University of Malaya.However, I couldn\'t find any information that students can study Korean studies as an exchange student. >> However, I couldn\'t find any information about whether or not I can take up Korean Studies as an exchange student.I\'d like to know if I could study that field in your university as a postgraduate exchange student. >> CORRECT!Unfortunately, I didn\'t find out yet what I want to know on your website. >> Unfortunately, I couldn\'t find this information on your website.I am aware of the fact that my university is not your partner university which can exchange students each other. >> I am aware of the fact that my university is not your partner university in your exchange student program.However, if your university allows for me to study in University of Malaya, my university, Korea University, could send an official letter and documents which you request. >> However, if your university would allow me to study there, my university, Korea University, could send an official letter and any document that you require.