Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I went to my mother-in-law's house, and I found that she already turned off the electric fan. kkk
After visiting my mother-in-law's house, I called her and notified this situation.
Then, she was very sorry to me.
So, I replied that I'm alright and I hope she would fully enjoy trip to Ulleungdo.
Anyway, it was a hard, but funny day.^^
Should students be allowed to grade (or evaluate) their teachers?Why? Why not?
In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers although their evaluations are not always fair.
A teacher's job is to teach various subjects to students.
That is to say, a teacher's job exists for students.
There is no one better than students when it comes to accurately evaluate teachers.
I often experience many teachers who are not good at teaching even though they have higher level of education.
On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their higher level of education.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! I guess what happened yesterday was a false alarm. I can understand your mother-in-law, though. I often have moments like that too.
When I leave the house, I would start thinking whether or not I forgot to turn off something. I get a bit paranoid too. Haha!
Thank you for doing your homework. Good job!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!I went to my mother-in-law\'s house, and I found that she already turned off the electric fan. kkk
>> CORRECT!After visiting my mother-in-law\'s house, I called her and notified this situation.
>> After that, I called her and told her about it.Then, she was very sorry to me.
>> She was very sorry to me.So, I replied that I\'m alright and I hope she would fully enjoy trip to Ulleungdo.
>> I said that it was alright and I told her to enjoy her trip to Ulleungdo.Anyway, it was a hard, but funny day.^^>> Anyway, it was hard but it was funny.
OR:
>> Anyway, I had a hard time, but it was a funny incident.In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers although their evaluations are not always fair.>> In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers, even though their evaluations are not always fair.
A teacher\'s job is to teach various subjects to students.
>> CORRECT!That is to say, a teacher\'s job exists for students.
>> CORRECT!There is no one better than students when it comes to accurately evaluate teachers.
>> There is no one better than a student when it comes to accurately evaluating a teacher.I often experience many teachers who are not good at teaching even though they have higher level of education.
>> I often meet many teachers who are not good at teaching despite their high level of education.On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their higher level of education.
>> On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their level of education.
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