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2016-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I went to my mother-in-law's house, and I found that she already turned off the electric fan. kkk After visiting my mother-in-law's house, I called her and notified this situation. Then, she was very sorry to me. So, I replied that I'm alright and I hope she would fully enjoy trip to Ulleungdo. Anyway, it was a hard, but funny day.^^ Should students be allowed to grade (or evaluate) their teachers?Why? Why not? In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers although their evaluations are not always fair. A teacher's job is to teach various subjects to students. That is to say, a teacher's job exists for students. There is no one better than students when it comes to accurately evaluate teachers. I often experience many teachers who are not good at teaching even though they have higher level of education. On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their higher level of education.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! I guess what happened yesterday was a false alarm. I can understand your mother-in-law, though. I often have moments like that too. When I leave the house, I would start thinking whether or not I forgot to turn off something. I get a bit paranoid too. Haha! Thank you for doing your homework. Good job! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I went to my mother-in-law\'s house, and I found that she already turned off the electric fan. kkk >> CORRECT!After visiting my mother-in-law\'s house, I called her and notified this situation. >> After that, I called her and told her about it.Then, she was very sorry to me. >> She was very sorry to me.So, I replied that I\'m alright and I hope she would fully enjoy trip to Ulleungdo. >> I said that it was alright and I told her to enjoy her trip to Ulleungdo.Anyway, it was a hard, but funny day.^^>> Anyway, it was hard but it was funny. OR: >> Anyway, I had a hard time, but it was a funny incident.In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers although their evaluations are not always fair.>> In my opinion, students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers, even though their evaluations are not always fair. A teacher\'s job is to teach various subjects to students. >> CORRECT!That is to say, a teacher\'s job exists for students. >> CORRECT!There is no one better than students when it comes to accurately evaluate teachers. >> There is no one better than a student when it comes to accurately evaluating a teacher.I often experience many teachers who are not good at teaching even though they have higher level of education. >> I often meet many teachers who are not good at teaching despite their high level of education.On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their higher level of education. >> On the other hand, there are a lot of teachers who are good at teaching regardless of their level of education.

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