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2016-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Hemingway and Steinbeck are excellent writers, but I prefer the last. 2. They are using new machineries in their industry. 3. John, as well as his brother, is coming to the party. 4. Afterwards we walked home. 5. He flunked biology. Now he wishes he had studied more.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Miss [이름]!^^

Thank you for doing a good job again. However, I want you to check my corrections if you have time. Take care and have a good day!^^

~Kelly^^

1. Hemingway and Steinbeck are excellent writers, but I prefer the last.
>> b. the latter.
2. They are using new machineries in their industry.
>> b. machinery
3. John, as well as his brother, is coming to the party.
>> Correct.
4. Afterwards we walked home.
>> Correct.
5. He flunked biology. Now he wishes he had studied more.

>> Correct.

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