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COMPOSITION WRITING: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think that easy to prepare food leads to several good change to peoples’ life.
I would like to say one good change below.
Food is also one of them, and it influences great ways to peoples’ life.
Among young people, convenient store is called to heaven for single person nowdays.
When I visited a convenient store, there are so many food to cook easily for them.
Famous soup, rice, dishes for just single person. When I try those food, those tastes good even!
Although food taste good and health, we can prepare with simple and easy.
That makes peoples’ life more covenient and time saving.
As they can save their time to prepare food, they can use more time to other field.
Finally, food to make easier makes our life more convenient & save our time.
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==Teacher Charlie==
I think that easy to prepare food leads to several good change to peoples’ life.
I would like to say one good change below.
Food is also one of them, and it influences great ways to peoples’ life.
>> I think that easy to prepare food has lead to several good changes in peoples lives wherein it has greatly influenced how we lead our lives.
Among young people, convenient store is called to heaven for single person nowdays.
>> Convenience stores, nowadays, is considered a heaven for single people especially for the younger generation.
When I visited a convenient store, there are so many food to cook easily for them.
Famous soup, rice, dishes for just single person. When I try those food, those tastes good even!
Although food taste good and health, we can prepare with simple and easy.
That makes peoples’ life more covenient and time saving.
As they can save their time to prepare food, they can use more time to other field.
>> When I went to a convenience store, there were so many kinds of pre-prepared food like single-serve soups and rice dishes. I tried some and it actually tastes good.Food can be prepared in simple and easy ways where they could be both healthy and delicious which will save time and would make peoples lives more convenient. The time that people can save can be used in other tasks.
Finally, food to make easier makes our life more convenient & save our time.
>> In conclusions, food being made easier to prepare had made our lives more convenient.
Thank you for answering our composition topic. You did a good job. ^^
If you have any questions about the corrections, don\'t hesitate in asking.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think that easy to prepare food leads to several good change to peoples’ life.
I would like to say one good change below.
Food is also one of them, and it influences great ways to peoples’ life.
>> I think that easy to prepare food has lead to several good changes in peoples lives wherein it has greatly influenced how we lead our lives.
Among young people, convenient store is called to heaven for single person nowdays.
>> Convenience stores, nowadays, is considered a heaven for single people especially for the younger generation.
When I visited a convenient store, there are so many food to cook easily for them.
Famous soup, rice, dishes for just single person. When I try those food, those tastes good even!
Although food taste good and health, we can prepare with simple and easy.
That makes peoples’ life more covenient and time saving.
As they can save their time to prepare food, they can use more time to other field.
>> When I went to a convenience store, there were so many kinds of pre-prepared food like single-serve soups and rice dishes. I tried some and it actually tastes good.Food can be prepared in simple and easy ways where they could be both healthy and delicious which will save time and would make peoples lives more convenient. The time that people can save can be used in other tasks.
Finally, food to make easier makes our life more convenient & save our time.
>> In conclusions, food being made easier to prepare had made our lives more convenient.
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