Homework

2016-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. As I told you before, I had started a study group to read some Chinese classics after finishing last semester. Today, I finally ended one of the Chinese Classics which I planed to read. So, I just feel that I'm on summer vacation. Now, I should pack my bags.^^ In your opinion what factors contribute to a good movie?Why? Give examples. In my opinion, interesting story and good acting are the vital factors which make a good movie. We can easily see the cases that interesting story of a movie captivates many audiences without any famous actor or actress. Next, good acting is the necessary to make a good movie. In addition to interesting story, good acting make the audiences concentrate on the movie and evoke their sympathy. Recently, it is true that the influence of big movie distributers is signigicant. However, I think that the above two factors are very basic conditions to complete a good movie.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Kaylee! Congratulations on finishing reading one of the Chinese Classics. One down, how many more to go? Thanks for doing your homework. I totally agree with what you said here. I wouldn\'t watch a movie unless I like the actors in it or the story is compelling enough. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!As I told you before, I had started a study group to read some Chinese classics after finishing last semester. >> As I told you before, I had started a study group to read some Chinese Classics after finishing last semester.Today, I finally ended one of the Chinese Classics which I planed to read. >> Today, I finally finished reading one of the Chinese Classics.So, I just feel that I\'m on summer vacation. >> I feel like I\'m on vacation now. OR: >> I feel like my summer vacation has officially started.Now, I should pack my bags.^^>> I should pack my bags now.In my opinion, interesting story and good acting are the vital factors which make a good movie. >> In my opinion, an interesting story and good acting are some vital factors which make a good movie.We can easily see the cases that interesting story of a movie captivates many audiences without any famous actor or actress.>> There are some cases where an interesting story captivates the audience even without any famous actor or actress in the movie. Next, good acting is the necessary to make a good movie. >> Good acting is also necessary to make a good movie.In addition to interesting story, good acting make the audiences concentrate on the movie and evoke their sympathy. >> In addition to an interesting story, good acting makes the audience concentrate on the movie and evokes their sympathy.Recently, it is true that the influence of big movie distributers is signigicant. >> Nowadays, it is evident that the influence of big movie distributors is also significant.However, I think that the above two factors are very basic conditions to complete a good movie. >> However, I think that the two factors I mentioned above are some of the basic conditions that make a good movie.

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