Homework

Hi Cool! ^^

Thank you for sharing about your past experiences. ^^

I was really smiling when I was reading your stories. :)

I think your childhood is full of fun memories, I can tell, basing

on your first story. :)

On the second one, I think you were blessed because

you had the chance to bond with your family. You

went to jeju island to have some quality time together and

you were able to converse or play with your kids. :)

A working dad is really hard but don\'t worry,

you will soon travel with your family to have a family bonding.

Take care always.

See you in class, Cool :)

~~ Teacher Kris

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I did a mistake for below homework so I write agian.

>> I did a mistake on my homework below so I wrote again.
 When I was young, my greatest memory was trip with my friends.

>> When I was young, my greatest memory was when my friends and I had a trip.
 We went on trip without adult\'s help.

>> We went on a trip without the adults\' help.
 All of my friends is 5 people including me.

>> We were all 5 including me.
 We couldn\'t prepare properly packing for trip because we were very young and we ever have not experienced a trip that we only went to.

>> We couldn\'t prepare or packing properly for the trip because we were young and we hadn\'t experienced a trip that we have not been to.
 But we enjoyed a lot because it was thg frist trip that we were only together.

>> But, we enjoyed a lot because it was the first trip that we had together. 

[Second]
I begin to write my homework as below.

>> I begin to write my homework below.

 when my greatest memory with my children is that we went to Jeju island.

>> The greatest memory that I have with my children was when we went to Jeju Island.

 I don\'t have free time in nomal days so we don\'t often go on trip.

>> I don\'t have free/vacant times during the normal days so we don\'t often go on a trip.

 I get off work late weekdays and somtimes work on weekend even because I have a lot of work.

>> I get off form work late on the weekdays and I sometimes work on the weekends because of so much work to do.

 I wanted to travel with my family.

>> Correct

 One day, I could get to use 5 dayoffs consecutively and it could use day that I want. 

 >> One day, I could get 5 day offs consecutively and I could use the days for my family.

 I made a reservation about tikets of airplane and hotel voucher.

>> I made a reservation for the plane tickets and a hotel voucher.

 My family was very happy.

>> Correct

 We stayed 5 days in Jeju island.

>> We stayed in Jeju Island for 5 days.

 I had enjoyment time with my children and wife.

>> I had enjoyed the time with my children and with my wife.

 Moreover, I talked with my children a lot so I was very happy.

>> Correct

 If I have like this chance, I will go on long trip.

>> If I have another chance like this, my family and I will go on for another vacation trip.